In many countries, a small number of people are able to purchase very expensive luxurious products. Some people believe that this is good for the economy, but others think that governments should not allow products above a certain price level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Purchasing the luxurious product, now a days become one of the most important entertainment for rich people to show off their items to others.But
this
part which is helping economic or not, should be negotiated. Many shops and luxury brand are sailing their items by very high of cost to their customers, which is compared to ordinary business, they are selling cheap items with low quality. By purchasing expensive items, I have to say might be
help
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a help
to the politics by paying more tax and benefit. Anyhow the rule
also need
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also needs
to provide and maintain
the good
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the best
quality of economics in the country and social services. From the other side, purchasing the luxurious product
also
is not comfortable for all people in one society, because the incomes for everyone is different. The matter of face is everybody can buy the items as per their budgets.
For instance
, people with low salaries are not able to buy a pair of shoes more than 50 dollars, so they are forced to buy lower than that cost. So in
this
regards the shop owners
accordingly
will pay a minimum service charge to rule. For rich people who are able to buy the items by massive amounts of money, they will not refer to ordinary and low level of cost vendors due to demonstrate their shopping to others and proud of them. So the brands accords to the records they are gaining more money from the customers and of course from the other side the ministry targeting them for charging more service payments for economic wise and taxes. To sum up, buying expensive and luxury items from brands and reputed shops will help the ministry more than normal shops to develop the economy and society.
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