With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

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Demand
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the all natural resources is increased with the increase of the population. In the twenty
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century,
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its first
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century, it's
really hard for any country to meet the human requirements, especially natural resources. Over
consumption
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of natural resources like fossil fuels is not only the damaged
earth
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environmentearth
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
environment, but
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made these fuels rare and expensive. Some people argue that it's time to open the undiscovered areas to access more resources, but for me, it's time to reduce the
consumption
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of fossil fuels and look for alternatives. There are many reports across the world, showing how using of petrol and other oils, increasing the pollution and changing the climate. Taking out a lot of resources from
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earth even
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the earth, even
the earth even
causing the earthquakes and natural disasters. Reducing
consumption
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of these oils will benefit
earth
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environment. CO2 levels in the climate will influence the temperatures and increase the global warming.
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CO2 levels are skyrocketing because of the over use of the fossil fuels, so
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is the time we should shift to the alternatives. Stoping the oil and gas
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is not that easy and quick, but possible. Science discovered different alternatives for oils. Few of them are solar
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, nuclear
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, wind
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. Solar
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and nuclear
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are more reliable and less harmful than these oils, but they still expensive fruits. Governments should concentrate to bring some technologies for effective usage of these energies
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of opening new areas to get
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oil
and gas which causes more damage to the
earth
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. To conclude, we should start using other resources rather exploiting new places.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global demand
  • finite resources
  • energy consumption
  • exploiting
  • untouched ecosystems
  • carbon emissions
  • climate change
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable energy solutions
  • geopolitical consequences
  • territorial disputes
  • dependency
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