People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
It is true that nowadays every person wants to live a comfortable
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competitive they all do work hard to attain all the things for them. Due to this
many of us are losing their traditional and cultural value. This
essay agrees with this
notion because of some reason which will be manifested in upcoming paragraphs below.
To begin
with, there are many reasons to stand against the given statement. Firstly
, in this
technical era where everyone wants to impress someone, want to achieve everything to shape their life according to their will. In fact majority of people living their life with a nominal personality. They all judge people on the basis of their cast and cloth that why people today try to update themselves with latest because they believe without these latest things they do not have real identity. They would not accept in their society. Therefore
, in order to complete their increasing desire, they use any unethical way of earning money that slash the place of traditional values from a person's mind. Secondly
, having the power of buying the things prompt people to show their superiority in front the world, that’s also
, brings a sense of attitude in the mind of people.
Furthermore
, in this
jet paced time majority of the people have to migrate to another place, as a result
, they adapt themselves according to the new environment and forgot their past as a means of a new activity style. Although
some does not change them at the time passed away. They know how to make a balance in their heart. Culture and tradition is the frame of strong relation that teaches us about our past. This
is widely said that if we forgot our past, we could not able to make a better future. Nevertheless
, in this
materialism soul style, no on feel regret to lose their culture and tradition because they do not have time to think about because the desire is increasing day by day significantly.
To conclude- Although
, some people maintain a fine balance in the every aspect f
their heart. Desire of earning things and proving superiority makes people blind; they even do not care about their old culture and tradition to make their growth comfortable.connects a noun with the preceding word
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