Some people think that the best way to broaden young people’s understanding of the world is to encourage them to travel to other countries. do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays young people often have tremendous troubles with their identity due to

narrow set

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a narrow set

the narrow set

of experiences

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which has

a deep impact on their future and life-altering decisions. It is widely considered that international

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

is one of the best ways to broaden

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one's

perspective and change that pattern. I wholeheartedly agree with

this

statement because visiting other countries may give youngsters incomparable experiences

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in

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life.

First

of all, travelling forces to step outside of

comfort zone

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the comfort zone

which can help the build their confidence. Being in a new environment, surrounded by locals, who hold different values pushes young people to think holistically, not only through the lens of established routine, which in consequence enables them to become smarter, more competent individuals.

Moreover

, as

adolescent

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adolescents

an adolescent

have to conquer the obstacles of communicating in

foreign language

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a foreign language

foreign languages

the foreign language

,

for

example asking

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example, asking

for direction or buying necessities, they are

building assertiveness

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building, assertiveness

and ability to

adopt

make fit for, or change to suit a new purpose

adapt

to emergent situations, which may be

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a crucial skill

while finding a dream job.

Second

of all,

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

abroad develops the cultural sensitivity, which is the key in a globalizing world. Being aware of cultural values and norms can not only be

fascinating but

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fascinating, but

can

also

help young adults

to understand

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understand

global issues and conflicts, which may play the instrumental role in both personal and professional

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lives

.

For

example when

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example, when

I was in Spain it was a norm that workers took a 2-3 hour siesta in the middle of the day, which was not a syndrome of

laziness but

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laziness, but

had a historical background in Spaniards, for whom family face time had have been the biggest value. In conclusion, I strongly agree that travelling is one of the best methods to expand the horizons of youngsters, while not everyone of them had that opportunity in life, learning

new language

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a new language

or trying a demanding hobby may be a promising replacement.