Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Dear Tim, I am writing

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letter in context to the complain that you have about the noise from my house flat. But Before that I would hope all are doing well in your family. Well from

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I had some repairing going on in my home and due to that we had to break some stuff and rebuilt it again,

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there were noises. Well, I am sincerely asking for your forgiveness, I totally understand that

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has cost a lot of disturbance and it could be very frustrating when you don't even know the reason for why it is happening. Well from now onwards, if there is anything of

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sort, I would certainly inform all the concerned persons and

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would give prior information to the secretary of the society and

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I would get

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word done at non-peak hours to cause less distress to anyone. At the end I would again like to say sorry for the problems that you had faced because of that, Best regards Jaspreet Singh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

176 words

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important as other subjects to a child’s development, and they should be compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many cities around the world pollution levels have risen in recent years. Why are some cities becoming more polluted? What effects does this have?

In the current society, many people are struggling with obesity. What are the main causes of this? What are the effects?

Parent allowed their children use ipad. Do yo agree or disagree?

Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. To what extent to you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You should write at least 250 words.