Traffic jam is a problem in many towns and cities. People believe that this can be done by making roads wider. Do you agree or disagree?

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congestion has become a major problem for all townships and metropolis. Some people argue that

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problem can be solved by making the roads wider.

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, I think that other measures like improving public

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system can reduce the service jams.

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, we have to understand the main cause of

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jams

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a solution can be found out.

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congestion is directly proportional to the number of vehicles on the road, the majority of them are personal vehicles used to commute from one point to another, either for work or for other purposes. People prefer to travel on their personal vehicles due to its convenience and comfort. But due to

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trend during peak hours there are lots of vehicles on the roads which causes transit jams. If a person is in an emergency he has to face a lot of difficulty in

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a situation. Looking at the above reasons, some people say that wider roads will reduce

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congestions.

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, in my opinion, if the public

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system is improved, it will be much more useful for people to commute to their desired destinations. Public

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like underground railways, metro and bullet trains will not only save time and hassle during the commute, but

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saves a lot of money as public shipping is able to carry more people in a single time and problem of road congestion will

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be vanished. Public transportation should be made comfortable and cheap, subscriptions should be given to the public, so that they prefer it over their own personal vehicles. To conclude, I think that widening the roads is not the only solution for freight congestions. Government should focus on improving the public shipment system and make a person's habit of using these modes of transportation rather than personal vehicles. It will not only eradicate transit related issues, but

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environment will be clean due to less emissions from vehicles.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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321 words

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