In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the shopping culture has advanced by the introduction of malls in the cities where all things are available under one roof, and

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, malls

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offer entertainment to the shoppers.

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leads to a discussion whether the entertainment factor overlaps shopping in the minds of people visiting malls. In my opinion, the statement is true as in today's

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, visitors prefer to visit plazas for enjoying and spending quality

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, shopping centres

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big in sizes and cover various areas like clothing, food delicacies, spa, music, playing zone for kids etc.

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, tossing multiple options to a shopper to look at with air conditioning at every level, relaxes the customer to roam freely. To enjoy

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services, people prefer to go to these plazas in their free

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. To illustrate

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, most of the malls include multiplexes and movies are available for enjoyment to visitors. It is often seen that many youngsters reach there just to watch films in the malls as it provide a

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luxurious

atmosphere.

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, family people prefer to visit malls with the support that they can leave

there

of them or themselves

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children at toy zone and adults themselves can go for window shopping or other things like creating memories.

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, people visiting shopping plazas

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like better; value more highly

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to click snaps as there are places where

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a switch that interrupts an electric circuit in the event of an overload

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are placed for people to look at. In conclusion, I opine that, in

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modern world,

changing culture

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the changing culture

shooping

searching for or buying goods or services

shopping

gave birth to malls which save precious

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of visiting multiple tourist attractions for entertainment and shopping. Shoppers, nowadays has various tastes and preferences other than buying things for which malls are the best place to visit and people prefer it

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to none.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Some people think that news has no connection with people’s lives; so it is a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter: describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.

In some countries, parents are choosing to teach children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of homeschooling outweigh the disadvantages?

some people say that the environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.