We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.

As fas as the population of our planet rising day by day, their privation for help grows as well.
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However, as
erybody knows one person could never help billions of people all the time because it is almost impossible to do. But as Mother Teresa said that "If you cannot feed hundreds of people, just feed once" and I definitely agree with
this
following theory and now depict a few of my opinions. In many countries like Africa, Brazil, Afghanistan and some parts of the world need consumption and educational help, even a hundreds of young and innocent children die from starvation or illness per day. We may have one question of who cares about them or what UNICEF and WHO are doing? My personal answer for
this
question is we are responsible for each other, afterwards there is no any organization in charity because these helpless people need attention and care
instead
of money and our one word which is "Are you okay" or "We love you and care about you" can truly treat them. Another factor to consider is we have to be capable of helping our nearest people
firstly
as it said "Charity begins at home"
then
we turn to help others. In my opinion, there is no better work than helping and volunteering. What is more, if our own country becomes wealthy, we will be able to export some help to our neighbour countries. In conclusion, I want to give my best perspective and say that we can help everybody, but
first
need to care our 9wn community.
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  • global interconnectivity
  • international cooperation
  • ethics
  • moral obligation
  • geographical borders
  • diplomatic relations
  • economic stability
  • global security
  • resource allocation
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