Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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It is a common belief that volunteering
community
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service
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should be a part of high
school
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obligatory contents. I firmly agree in terms of some reasons which are elaborated in these below
paragraphes
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraphs
. In the modern life, many
school
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children have not enough time to work as
volunteer
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a volunteer
volunteers
.
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, they have never learnt how
to help
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helping
others without any benefits. Due to, the high
school
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authorities give information and highlight
importanence
the quality of being important and worthy of note
importance
of the
community
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service
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.
For example
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, a survey shows that the kids who join
community
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service
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in their
first
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mid term, they adapt immediately to the communities, even if they are so young.
In addition
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, their
school
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score
are getting
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is getting
higher while they are working for it. I agree the most significant thing is a full of mercy and friendly mind for education. If the youth were in
this
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type of charity, the society would be better place ever had before.
On the other hand
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, there are some concerns about
community
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service
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. To employ young people is the risk of their
characteristic
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character
. When they are assaulted or attacked
from
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by
someone, they would recover very hard.
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, the managers should give strong
dicipline
a branch of knowledge
discipline
disciplines
to
defence
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defend
defending
them, not only physical,
also
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psycological
mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
psychologically
.
For instance
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, a college in a small
distint
separated in space or coming from or going to a distance
distant
distinct
town,
this
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service
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were compulsory, so many children raised stronger
instead
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of fragile according to their lecturers. They were very
suprised
taken unawares or suddenly and feeling wonder or astonishment
surprised
how to prevail against life's
obstables
something immaterial that stands in the way and must be circumvented or surmounted
obstacles
. In conclusion, the
community
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service
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should be obligatory for the youth. In order to realize real world and how to important get help. Obviously, the young people who work for
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community
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the community
will have been more
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
and
satistified
filled with satisfaction
satisfied
in their future life. I completely agree
this
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is a convenient and
benecifial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
lesson for them.
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