Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is a common belief that volunteering
community
service
should be a part of high school
obligatory contents. I firmly agree in terms of some reasons which are elaborated in these below paragraphes
.
In the modern life, many one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraphs
school
children have not enough time to work as volunteer
. Suggestion
a volunteer
volunteers
Therefore
, they have never learnt how to help
others without any benefits. Due to, the high Suggestion
helping
school
authorities give information and highlight importanence
of the the quality of being important and worthy of note
importance
community
service
. For example
, a survey shows that the kids who join community
service
in their first
mid term, they adapt immediately to the communities, even if they are so young. In addition
, their school
score are getting
higher while they are working for it. I agree the most significant thing is a full of mercy and friendly mind for education. If the youth were in Suggestion
is getting
this
type of charity, the society would be better place ever had before.
On the other hand
, there are some concerns about community
service
. To employ young people is the risk of their characteristic
. When they are assaulted or attacked Suggestion
character
from
someone, they would recover very hard. Suggestion
by
Although
, the managers should give strong dicipline
to a branch of knowledge
discipline
disciplines
defence
them, not only physical, Suggestion
defend
defending
also
psycological
. mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
psychologically
For instance
, a college in a small distint
town, separated in space or coming from or going to a distance
distant
distinct
this
service
were compulsory, so many children raised stronger instead
of fragile according to their lecturers. They were very suprised
how to prevail against life's taken unawares or suddenly and feeling wonder or astonishment
surprised
obstables
.
In conclusion, the something immaterial that stands in the way and must be circumvented or surmounted
obstacles
community
service
should be obligatory for the youth. In order to realize real world and how to important get help. Obviously, the young people who work for community
will have been more Suggestion
the community
succesful
and having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
satistified
in their future life. I completely agree filled with satisfaction
satisfied
this
is a convenient and benecifial
lesson for them.promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
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