Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea, some think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? Give examples of your knowledge.
Global
environment faces many hazards these days; Add an article
The global
however
, pollution caused by plastic
bags
is one of its major threats. It is argued that banning of
these kinds of products can reduce their detrimental effects on the globe. Personally, I totally agree with Change preposition
apply
this
opinion and I will further
explain the reasons below. Admittedly, plastic
bags
have many hazardous effects on the ecosystem of the planet. One of these hazards is that when they settle down in the ground, animals swallow them by mistake and in turn
they block their digestive system. Add a comma
turn,
Consequently
, they do not eat well, lose weight and eventually they die. In India, for example
, on surgical inspection of Correct article usage
the caws
caws
digestive system, more than fifty Change noun form
caws'
caw's
plastic
bags
have been found in only one animal. This
explains how these bags
pose a threat on
the livestock. Change preposition
to
Nevertheless
, plastic
bags
are washed with rain fall
in the sewage system of the big cities. Correct your spelling
rainfall
This
will either block the stream, disrupting the flow and damaging the infra structure
or continue to pass to rivers or oceans. Correct your spelling
infrastructure
As a result
, they shred into micro shreds which are eaten by aquatic creatures. This
leads to the same above mentioned
digestive disturbances Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
to
those creatures and Change preposition
in
kill
them. Change the verb form
kills
According to
National
Geographic channel, hundreds of species are at risk of extinction owing to the dire effect of Correct article usage
the National
plastic
bags
. In conclusion, having presented some drastic consequences of using plastic
bags
on our environment, in my opinion, if these products are not banned in the near future, further
damage to ecosystem
is expected.Add an article
the ecosystem
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