Tourism is encouraged in many countries. does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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is one of the important aspect of income for many countries, and many nations are exploring to make best out of it, so, it can affect a nation positively or negatively. In the following paragraphs I am going to discuss various positive and negative aspects of it and present my opinion towards the end of the essay.

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allows a nation to utilize its heritage, natural beauties, art and culture, for the benefit of the country,

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, tourist from another nation or region can be a major source of income. In India, almost 20 % of the economy is generated from

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sector.

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not only benefits, financial condition, but

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it generates employment.

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, As per reports of the Times newspaper, people living near the tourist places have more options of earning compared to other places.

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, the resources of the tourist places are used extensively, which can cause damage to the monuments and natural beauties. As

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can affect the environment of the area and deteriorate it. In India,

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type of situation aroused to one of natural beauty in 2016, where large landslides were observed. And

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can be a reason for bringing a disease from another region of the world.

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, as per reports, the spread of COVID-19 happened due to tourists from other nations. In conclusion,

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is needed for the economy of many countries as

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creates a new income source for government and

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, jobs. At the same time it affects our art, culture, heritage and natural beauties adversely. In my opinion

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can benefit a country and must be explored in most possible ways.

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