It is believed that the optimal method of making roads more secure is to raise the legal driving age. While this may work to a certain extent, I would argue that there are superior ways to curb traffic accidents.

It is believed that the optimal method of making roads more secure is to raise the legal driving age. While
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may work to a certain extent, I would argue that there are superior ways to curb
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accidents. It is understandable why some people advocate banning young people from driving. The key rationale in
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view is that young drivers tend to be reckless, which may result in accidents. Vietnam perfectly exemplifies
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laws and commit serious offences
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-related injuries and casualties.
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, I believe the aforementioned measure may be futile in the long run. As reckless driving occurs both among the old and the young, increasing the legal driving age may not be a holistic approach to the problem of accidents.
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offenders or suspend their driver’s license indefinitely. Another solution is to allocate more funding to improving road infrastructures.
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