Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. Do you agree with this opinion?

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There is an opinion that medical treatment should not to be free of charge without any distinction because individuals have to be responsible for their physical conditions. I totally disagree with
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idea; in fact, I think the exact opposite that everyone despite their income should have free medical support.
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, if a
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service was on a paying basis for every person without taking into account their earnings, it would lead to low-income group stays without decent medical help. It is obvious that
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death rates would increase due to lack of medical service.
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, it is important that every citizen has equal opportunities and rights; including the right to free
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care system.
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is because every working person pays taxes and the government in turn should provide free medical support at the moment of need.
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, people paying enormous money for medical services may literally lose everything.
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, I have seen a shortage of modern homeless people in America, and surprisingly, there are plenty of professionals among them. The only reason why they ended up on the streets is enormous medical bills.
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, it is fair to put full responsibility for the
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of a person because physical
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depends on many factors
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as the environment. In
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case, authorities and industries should be held accountable for the public
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and the level of pollution, which plays a significant role in the state of public
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. To illustrate, there is an oil refining plant in Atyrau city and due to emissions from the plant, many citizens have breathing-related problems. In conclusion, I completely disagree that people should pay for medicine by themselves. I do believe that it is the government’s obligation to provide free medical services for its citizens.
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