Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. Agree/disagree?

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production is a matter of not only national economy, but
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quality of life for the citizens. Some assert that nations should grow crops to feed their population and limit their
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import
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. In my opinion, heading to a more self-sufficient
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supply is a pathway to sustainable development, but it is not always the case for some countries. On the one hand, there are some advantages of developing
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for people in their vernacular market.
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, locally grown products do not need to be transported for a long time and travel thousands of miles,
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, it is more likely that they will not contain harmful chemical preservations in order to keep their fresh attributes and nutritional quality.
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,
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which is directly transported from farmers to markers is healthier.
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, in connection with limited transit, its costs may be minimal which in consequence may lead to creation of savings which can be used to increase development of the local farms.
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, preventing the unemployment may be another significant benefit by securing a greater number of workplaces.
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, Greece is one of the successful country, that avoids
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import and
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import, and
still does not have a high range of cutback.
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, there are several reasons for importing goods.
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with, it gives opportunity to consume a wide range of products, which often contains a variety of vitamins, which local foodstuff may not have.
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, due to diversity of climate not all kinds of
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throughout the year. Thanks to
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people can eat fresh, nutritious vegetables
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any time
, which can enrich their diet. In conclusion,
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it is beneficial to
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goods from different countries, it is crucial to produce
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for residents and put a strict limit on
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because of improving the state of the budget and guarantee of a healthy diet.  Check the Essay New Essay
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