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Band 8

You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: •Where have you moved? •What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? •What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address.

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Dear Mr. Brad, I hope
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 letter finds you in good health and you are doing well. I am writing
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 letter to inform you about facing problems in terms of banking communication
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 the change of my home
address
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. As you know, I have been living in Chittagong since 2018 with my whole family, but recently I moved to Dhaka because of getting a new job offer from a reputed multinational company.
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, I will be starting my new job there as a human resources manager from 15th July. As a valued customer, I have been taking banking services from your esteemed bank for a long day, and my old
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 has been used since
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 for all kinds of banking correspondence. These days, I am not getting the updated information from the bank as the old
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 is still being used to send banking-related documents.
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, I would like to suggest you update my banking
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 to Kamal Mansion, Dhaka, and request that you send all types of documents to
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 new
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 from now onwards.
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, you can directly reach me out at 01797577599 or [email protected] I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding
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 matter. Yours faithfully, Faisal

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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear purpose and that the structure of the content flows logically from the introduction through to the conclusion without unnecessary repetition or deviation from the topic.
task achievement
Make sure to fully expand on each point required by the task to provide a complete response. Address all bullet points given in the prompt thoroughly.
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