More and more people are using computer and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers on paper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that technological developments lead to the
less
something that is lost
loss
of some issue products like books, magazines and newspaper. I partly agree with
this
assertion, while it may be correct in some cases of society, others seem to be unaffected by
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the Internet
and the modern world. On the one hand, the advances in technology have certainly contributed to the development of human life. In
this
case, it is obtaining knowledge.
Instead
of spending a long time to find what they need in a book, people can discover exactly what they want by searching it.
Furthermore
, hundred of results can assist people to have the comparison between the news. While a significant number of figures are updated everyday on the Internet, the knowledge in the book books or magazines just keep informed in the period of time.
For example
, students are required to deepen the lectures by watching their lesson on
Youtube
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YouTube
or reading electronic newspaper related,
Consequently
,
this
is
an
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a
seasible
showing reason or sound judgment
sensible
solution to make them grow into modern citizens. On the other, printed products still necessary and meaningful in many ways.
First
, most of successful individuals achieve their accomplishment by reading books custom. They reckon that some books like Enchantment by Guy Kawasaki or How to win friends
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and
influence people
of
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by
Dale Carnegie is highly epoch, which teach them how to stand up after each failure and overcome their limits.
Secondly
, reading printed newspaper every
morning still
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morning, still
the beneficial habit to supplement
people
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peoples'
person's
peoples
awareness. It
also preventing
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also prevents
is also preventing
them from some diseases created by
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Greenlight
of electric devices. In conclusion,
although
tech products are really
convenients
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
for modern life, printed products can not disappeared due to their benefits.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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