There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
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controls the world nowadays; it has existed Use synonyms
from
centuries and people enjoy its variety of genres. Suggestion
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However
, often time people start listening to international Linking Words
music
rather than listening to local and traditional Use synonyms
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However
, I believe that traditional Linking Words
music
overweights international Use synonyms
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as it shows a big part of Use synonyms
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culture
and the Suggestion
the culture
country
identity.
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music life
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music, life
will be
completely different. Suggestion
would be
Music
encourages us to think and to switch our moods and it helps us Use synonyms
relaxing
or concentrating. Suggestion
relax
to relax
Music
is an art that cannot be done for everybody which make it special. Lately people tend to listen to talented international artists Use synonyms
in
the daily basis rather than listening to local artists. Suggestion
on
For example
, in South America, teenagers prefer to listen to English songs and to follow American artists Linking Words
such
as Justin Linking Words
bieber
. Suggestion
Bieber
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convenience
for them.
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convenient
However
, I believe that traditional Linking Words
music
is more important than international Use synonyms
music
. The Use synonyms
culture
of a Use synonyms
country
can be express throughout local Use synonyms
music
, while most of the international Use synonyms
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such
as American Linking Words
music
is produced in a studio with machines, traditional Use synonyms
music
is produced with instruments that show the Use synonyms
country
backgrounds and history. Use synonyms
Moreover
, often times, international Linking Words
music
has English lyrics and pretty similar rhythms whereas traditional Use synonyms
music
imply local language and a wide range of sounds. In my opinion, traditional Use synonyms
music
is a presentation of Use synonyms
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richness for each Suggestion
cultural
country
. If we do not foster Use synonyms
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music
minor Use synonyms
population
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population, such
such
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indigenes
might lost a big part of their originating where it is found
indigenous
indigence
culture
.
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Although
international Linking Words
music
is easily widespread along people, traditional Use synonyms
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should not be left behind, Use synonyms
otherwise
it will extinguish in the future and new generation will not have the opportunity of listening Linking Words
such
an important genre.Linking Words
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