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These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, online teaching is recommended by many university staff to
instruet
impart skills or knowledge to
instruct
 the students from the distance. Some people believe that
cources
education imparted in a series of lessons or meetings
courses
coaches
cookies
 are offered through the Net has more disadvantages than
unconverted teaching system
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the unconverted teaching system
, while others think that there are vital advantages. On the one hand, online teaching can avoid time-consuming on getting to the Universities
by
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in
public transport car
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the public transport car
a public transport car
, on foot and 50 on. Some students
always be
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are always being
 late for the important lectures which can react to their final marks of annual term. In view of, those are
victom
an unfortunate person who suffers from some adverse circumstance
victims
 of traffic jams and road accidents.
In other words
, a lot of learners claim that they
can not
can not
cannot
 put forward their full-potential in front of highly-successful professors, science doctors or their peers. Internal learning is the way factor for them to gather their evidence and self-confidence.
Besides
 that, during the process, students can acquire significant
knowledge no
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knowledge, no
 matter, they are on
desert
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the desert
, on the pole, at sea or even on the moon.
On the other hand
, online teaching is the key phenomenon for students who are isolated from the public or their peers. On the whole,
those
plural of "this"
these
 are always not good at talking with new friend or people who are
come
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coming
accross
to the opposite side
across
 in their life-expectancy.
Moreover
, face-to-face lectures are
fundemental aspect
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a fundamental aspect
fundamental aspect
fundamental aspects
 in
this
 up-to-date university's
stuff
personnel who assist their superior in carrying out an assigned task
staff
. In view of,
animative
 lectures can bring up students have to become a good member of society and look at
tyutors'
a session of intensive tuition given by a tutor to an individual or to a small number of students
tutorials
 lye-contacts with students that will be beneficial point for young professors and instructors. In
conusion
disorder resulting from a failure to behave predictably
confusion
cognition
concussion
, it may be possible that online teaching
bring
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brings
 about more facilities for unsociable or shy students.
However
,
this
 process is one of
the hard
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the hardest
 exercise for students who has got relationship with an optometrist and nearsighted.
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