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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
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The table given highlights data about types of
birds
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 in Woodchuck Country at different seasons of the year. 
Overall
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, the season when there are a lot of kinds of
birds
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 is in summer, which is approximately double
more
Correct quantifier usage
apply
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than
Correct word choice
that
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 which
prefers
Correct subject-verb agreement
prefer
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 the cold temperature,
while
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 the
birds
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 that stay there anyway three times less. There are a few varieties of
birds
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,
who
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that
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 will stay in
this
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 country despite the season, suchlike woodpeckers, cardinals, and crows, which are less than a
third
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 of the table. In winter, there are several species of
birds
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 that stay there,
such
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 as cardinals, crows, juncos,
woodpeckers
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and woodpeckers
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 which get two-fifths of the given
birds
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. Types of
birds
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, namely bluebirds, cardinals, crows, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos and woodpeckers, that prefer warm
climate
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climates
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 contain ninety
percent
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per cent
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 of all the
birds
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 given in the table.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words birds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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