The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The table given highlights data about types of
birds
in Woodchuck Country at different seasons of the year. 
Overall
, the season when there are a lot of kinds of
birds
is in summer, which is approximately double
more
Correct quantifier usage
apply
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than
Correct word choice
that
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which
prefers
Correct subject-verb agreement
prefer
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the cold temperature,
while
the
birds
that stay there anyway three times less. There are a few varieties of
birds
,
who
Correct pronoun usage
that
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will stay in
this
country despite the season, suchlike woodpeckers, cardinals, and crows, which are less than a
third
of the table. In winter, there are several species of
birds
that stay there,
such
as cardinals, crows, juncos,
woodpeckers
Correct word choice
and woodpeckers
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which get two-fifths of the given
birds
. Types of
birds
, namely bluebirds, cardinals, crows, mockingbirds, orioles, vireos and woodpeckers, that prefer warm
climate
Fix the agreement mistake
climates
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contain ninety
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
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of all the
birds
given in the table.
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