The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Generally the old people in our society hold a firm opinion about the lifestyle of people that how their life should be maintained, how they should think or behave with others.
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, according to others, these ideas of them are no more in vogue in
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modern world. I partially believe that the ideas of old people are still helpful to some extent, but not fully. I think, in some cases, they require some modification. In our life, many of us have to listen to the advice & instruction of older people a lot. In Asian families, old members of the family dominate the other family members by their opinions. Most of them consider that their opinions are always right.
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, they
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think that their lifetime experience can give a clear idea about how people should maintain their livelihood.
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, they
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hold unchangeable ideas about how young people should show behaviour to others.
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, my father seldom comments about the lifestyle of young people whom he sees on TV. On the other side, it is true that the judgement of the veterans is not always legit. In fact, their
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is not same. Many things have changed over
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. For
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reason, to keep pace with the advanced world, people are always changing.
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, day by day the way of nurturing the children & younger generation is changing over
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, my mother used to scold me for my mistakes. But if anyone thinks of doing that now to any child, he or she might react in a negative way. That's why sometimes the way of their thinking won't work in some cases of
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. To conclude, it can be said that what old community keep in their mind is relatively traditional as compared to the lifestyle of the younger generation. Still, their experience is an invaluable achievement which can come handy in some cases to solve the problems in different stages of life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional ideas
  • Modern life
  • Younger generations
  • Stability
  • Guidance
  • Foundation
  • Cultural heritage
  • Rigid gender roles
  • Resistance to new technologies
  • Adaptability
  • Innovative solutions
  • Respecting elders
  • Maintaining family bonds
  • Stifle progress
  • Fusion of ideas
  • Outdated values
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