Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extend do you agree with this statement?

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It is generally argued that the government should spend money only on services that help its people rather than investing unnecessarily in the arts

industry

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. I do not agree with

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argument, though I believe that the budget allocated to the welfare services for the public should be significantly more that that to the development of industries

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as music and theatre. It is a well known fact that public services play an important role in the development of a

country

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. Services

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as a good medical facility and education are of utmost importance. A well established healthcare system helps the

country

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fight any disease and keeps its citizen

heathy

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

health

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, Germany due to its efficient health care facility was able to fight

novel corona virus

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the novel corona virus

better than any of its European counterparts.

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, a strong educational system is critical for having a high literacy rate.

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encourages industries to set up their base in that location which generates employment. To cite an example, many multinational companies have set up their manufacturing plants or software hubs in India as its easy to find quality human resources.

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, completely neglecting art of any form is not a wise choice either. Arts like music, painting

Accept space

theatre play a pivotal role in improving the economy of a

country

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, India's movie

industry

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contributes 5% to

nation's GDP

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the nation's GDP

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, not promoting

this

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industry

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may lead to loss in the revenue of the government.

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, arts

industry

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helps to increase the fame of a

country

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and fosters a good relationship

among

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between

two nations. To illustrate, while I was travelling in Iran, I found people very

accomodating

helpful in bringing about a harmonious adaptation

accommodating

because they loved India just because of its film

industry

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, it can be said that the art

industry

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helps in building a good image of a

country

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potrayed

represented graphically by sketch or design or lines

portrayed

correctly. In conclusion,

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quality public services with regards to

healthcare

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health care

and education is essential, the government cannot simply ignore its other

industry

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such

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as arts which is a key to drive employment and

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helps a

country

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to build a positive reputation at a global stage.

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