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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend so you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#children #difference #right #age #punishment #distinction
Nowadays many
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Nowadays, many
 teenagers do not know d to distinguish between correct and incorrect deeds. Some people argue children should learn them from an early
age
. I completely agree with
this
 point of view and I believe punishment is so essential. On the one hand, to my way of thinking, there are some reasons why children need
tolearn
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to learn
 to separate good and bad deeds from an early
age
.
For example
, if children know and
understand distinguish
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understand, distinguish
 of correct incorrect things, their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 will be powerful and they do not happen prohibited events. What is more, if not absorb the difference of kindness and harm to children early
age
,
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,
 after children it may be impossible to teach how to separate right and wrong because they will be grown and they may commit incorrect deeds even crimes involuntarily.
On the other hand
, it seems to me that there is
also
 a special place for punishment and it is an integral part of educating children at an early
age
. Parents punish their children when children commit bad situations. In a consequence of
this
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these
 children try not
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an uproarious party
do
to
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with
 that event things as much as possible
next
 time. Noteworthy parents and teachers should not forget that if they use strong punishments for children, hatred might appear in children for their teachers and parents.
Thus
children
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the children
 should be punished in easy
ways
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ways, such
such
 as children should punish by taking away what they like and teachers should call the children's parents and exhort the children in front of their parents. In conclusion, children should be taught from an early
age
 how to know the difference between wrong and right
also
 punishment
improve
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improves
 their upbringing for the better.
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