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discuss: Is money the most important thing in life?

#money #life
There is no doubt that
money
 is not everything, but without
money
 people have nothing.
Money
 dominates mankind
such
 as health,
time
, and love. There is currently a lot of debate about
currency
 is more important than anything in the world or not? What is more, there are no straightforward answers.
On the other hand
, with great
money
, people who are struggling with the disease will live longer. They have the opportunity to treat by good doctors and modern equipment.
Furthermore
,
currency
 cannot buy
time
, but it helps us create more
time
 for ourselves.
Instead
 of spending a lot of
time
 for cooking or cleaning the house, people who have cash, often hire maids to have more
time
 to earn extra
money
 or take care of themselves.
In addition
, is
money
 a condition to ensure love always happy? Having
money
 can help us look after and stabilize your family life. Take my sister as an example, she fell head over heels with a man
then
 they married, after one year they were unemployed and had no
money
 to cover their lives, they always argued even that man beat my sister and eventually they broke up.
On the other hand
, if we do not know how to use or earn
currency
 correctly, it will be bad for us. Because of
money
, a lot of people have lost their personalities. They steal, leave even murder victims to get the
money
 they want. To sum up, we cannot live without
money
, the nature of it is good or bad depending on the user. Do not make yourself a slave to
currency
 and know how to master it.
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