You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include: -Details about the meeting -The problem you face -What should be done

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my disappointment with the service I received during my recent stay at your hotel in Bangalore.
Last
week I stayed with my wife at your hotel, which we chose for its high reputation and premium rates.
However
, the room's condition was unacceptable. Upon entering, we noticed that the pillowcases were stained and there were visible shoe marks on the floor.
This
was especially disappointing, as it was our first night together. I requested assistance from a staff member, but he informed me that he could not help as his shift had ended. We were required to wait an additional two hours for another staff member to arrive and clean the room. Meanwhile, we were asked to wait at the reception, which was an embarrassing situation for me in front of my wife. Given the inconvenience caused, I would appreciate it if you would consider offering a partial refund as a gesture of goodwill. I hope that, in the future, room cleanliness and timely assistance will be given high priority. Thank you for your attention to
this
matter. I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Mitali
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Coherence and Cohesion Advice
Ensure that all paragraphs focus on a single idea to maintain clear structure throughout.
Task Achievement Advice
Clearly state what you expect the organizer to do in the conclusion to strengthen the task response.
Coherence and Cohesion Highlight
The letter has a clear structure with a proper greeting and closing, making it easy to read.
Task Achievement Highlight
The tone is suitable and formal, matching the context of addressing a complaint to an organizer.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation
  • dissatisfied
  • inconvenience
  • address the issue
  • compensatory measures
  • management
  • remedy
  • productive
  • experience
  • participation
  • amenities
  • unhelpful
  • conditions
  • remediation
  • ensure
  • comfortable
  • arrangement
  • foreseeable future
  • retrieve
  • corporate meeting
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