Doctors should be responsible for educating improve their health. Do you agree with this?
Some doctors just heal their patients without giving suggestions about improving their
health
. Some people believe that doctors should take responsibility for educating about improving health
. Therefore
, this
essay will discuss why this
essay agrees with this
statement.
On the one hand, some patients have some bad habits about well-being care
. Firstly
, some patients don't
have the discipline to take care
of their health
after seeing an expert. Moreover
, some patients don't
follow health
care
instructions. For example
, some patients have to do physical th
erapy but t
hey don'Accept comma addition
therapy, but
t
do that for some reasons. It means this
patients' behaviour could have a bad effect on therapy
. On top of that, some people who suffer from illness receive wrong information about health
care
from the internet. For instance
, some people trust information about taking care
of their health
on the internet than information from a doctor
. This
is because they don't
have to pay big money for seeing a doctor
.
On the other hand
, The reasons why doctors should be responsible for educating their patients are an increase in cure efficiency and a drop in a medical expense. Firstly
, some patients need a continuous therapy
. For example
, some patients who have a broken leg injured need to do physical therapy
continuously, if they do not do physical therapy
, they will have a chronic symptom. Hence
, Doctors should give some advices about physical therapy
for making their patients come to do physical remedy. Finally
, the continuous treatment reduces a treatment expense. For instance
, some patients who never miss an appointment with a doctor
and take advice from an expert can recover from their injured shortly. Therefore
, they do not have to pay much money for seeing a doctor
.
In conclusion, doctors should take responsibility about giving health
care
advice and update patient's symptom, because some patients have a bad behaviour to take care
of their health
. Moreover
, giving advice is one of method to increase efficiency of treatment.Submitted by palmdotax on
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