The use of cell phones (mobiles phones) has grown rapidly in the past few years. People use them for both business and personal reasons. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the widespread use of cell phones (mobile phones)? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is undeniable that mobile phones
has become
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have become
an
inseperable
not capable of being separated
inseparable
part of our life. People are using
cell
phone
for their personal needs as well as at their workplaces. There are numerous advantages which mobile
phone
bring
for
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forward
the
usesr
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
use
user
worse
,
however
, its disadvantages cannot be overlooked. To embark upon,
cell
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the cell phone
phone
has changed the way of entertainment, socialization and work. People use
cell
phone
toremain
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to remain
conneted
being joined in close association
connected
committed
to their dear ones, which is one of the prime
advantage
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advantages
of these devices.
For example
, in case of any
mishapping
so badly formed or out of shape as to be ugly
misshapen
or
emenrgency
a sudden unforeseen crisis (usually involving danger) that requires immediate action
emergency
, one can
connet
connect, fasten, or put together two or more pieces
connect
with his family for assistance.
Secondly
, it has some feature which
make
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makes
it worth a buy
,
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,
such
as camera and music. One can click number of pictures
whereever
where in the world
wherever
he/
sh
female pronoun; a female, or something regarded as female, e.g. a ship
she
go and create memories for the lifetime.
Moreover
, people can keep them
entertain
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entertained
byusing
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by using
usingin
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using at
using in
their ideal time, especially while travelling.
On the contrary
,
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,
the excess use of mobile phones can be
deterimental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
for the health of the individuals.Excess time spent on these
gagets
a device or control that is very useful for a particular job
gadgets
can lead to strain in the eyes, sleep
derprivation
a state of extreme poverty
deprivation
, social isolation and
lacl
the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
lack
of physical movement in the
indiciduals
.
Moreover
,
yung
(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth
young
people especially children get glued to these
cellphones
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cell phones
, which might result in disobedient behaviour, social isolation and uncaring for
rest
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the rest
of the world. Inappropriate
contnet
everything that is included in a collection and that is held or included in something
content
on the mobile can make the children go astray and can expose them to unethical deeds. To conclude,
although
cell
phones have multiple advantages
such
as
,
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,
connectivity, some
specil
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
special
features etc
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features, etc
, but the disadvantages like, negative impact on health and exposure of inappropriate data, can not
br
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
ignored.
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