A woman’s place is in the home. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

From the past

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there were so many arguments about Women’s right.There were different ideologies

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as women do not education

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women’s value is lower than men and so on

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One of them is the concept “

woman

’s place is in the

home

“.Most of people think that a

woman

has to bring-up children

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Woman

responsible for everything in the

home

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However, the woman who

However the woman who

However a woman who

woman

who is equal man and who works have significant positive effects.

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A woman

The woman

may be key of evolution

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guarantee of healthy population and lifeguard of peace.

First

of all

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educated women can be key of improvement because that

woman

knows how to bring-up children

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The

person

who got right upbringing has opportunity make do new things and discover

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Especially women who know more thing and who work among the colleagues have more creative logic

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So women can effect to

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develop

by bringing up their children.

Also

, women have collectively made progress concerning social participation, politics, employment, and leadership

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For instance

, we have women presidents and leaders of considerable organizations.

Secondly

, Female has

considirable role

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a considerable role

considerable role

considerably role

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in

health.One

person

makes country famous, reverse one stupid

person

disgrace country. I think healthy population is the main thing

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in

every country.In

this

statement

also

women

has linking

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are linking

. Stress is a major cause of many diseases

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A

person

who sits always at

home

may feel herself stressful, every day to see or to do the same thing effects negatively.

Consequently

, if she is pregnant, her baby may have psychological problems like autism.If she has children at

home she

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home, she

may swear them and it

also

brings troubles. Meanwhile, women have greater role in communication.Matron can be intermediary in

every where

to or in any or all places

everywhere

.A small example is in the family, she mediates her children.A big reason is relationship easy and effective

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Because women can speak beautifully. I want to say one Chinese proverb « Women hold up half the sky».It can proof all information which I mention. To conclude, I want to say I want to say female has a majority in everywhere.

Also

woman

a main key to future

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and

development

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develop

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So women’s and men’s should be equal, and

then

the world would become exciting.

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Finally, I

say I absolutely disagree with

this

statement.