Some people are of the opinion that women should play an equal role in police or military forces like the army. Others believe that this work is unsuitable for women. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that women nowadays are playing an increasingly significant role in our society,

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by taking up employment in sectors which were mainly male dominated. While some are of the opinion that women are not suited for police or military forces, I would agree with those who agree that they should be given an equal chance. Many believe that women cannot be employed in the

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force.

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is because arguably, females do not have the strength and stamina required for

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a strenuous job.

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, in sports competitions, the difference in physical strength of man and woman is obvious. Some men can run faster and are stronger than their female counterparts.

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, people

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view think that a woman`s place is better

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doing stereotypical work

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as being a teacher or a carer.

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, I believe that women should be given the opportunity to participate in the police or military forces. The reason for

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is that women possess other attributes that can be of benefit to those sectors.

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, a woman is likely to be more inclined to being nurturing and caring;

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traits are ideal for female medics in the army.

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, a female presence is more appropriate in certain circumstances. A fitting example is that in Mauritius, a policewoman needs to be present whenever a girl or lady is taking her driving test.

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builds more trust and imparts a sense of security to the test taker. In conclusion, both arguments have their merits. On balance,

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tend to believe that women should be able to participate equally in

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forces as they have other traits and qualities that men do not possess.