Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups,while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are two contrasting views on which method is better for students to study, alone or in groups. From my point of view, I am convinced that group learning is essential, but learning
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ourselves is as just as important. There is no doubt that in group learning students can exchange their minds.
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, our teachers would require us to discuss in terms of some topic, in
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manner, not only can we learn from others, but we are
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able to generate new ideas.
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, studying in groups is
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more efficient. A significant task might take a few days for one
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a lot less time for teamwork. Just as the old saying goes 'Many hands make light work'
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, it is necessary to learn on our own.
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of all, studying alone makes us more focused on our work. We can easily see when someone
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a book, most of them prefer to read it alone for the reason that the crowd would probably distract themselves. Apart from that, students are willing to figure out some problems by themselves to make a sense of achievement at some time.
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but not least, independent learning is beneficial to improve the ability of individual thinking. On balance, both of the measures are important for studying. Comparing to argue which way is better, students should pay more attention to adopt an appropriate learning method under what circumstance.

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