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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it.

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It's undeniable that virtual purchase is going to be the main way of shopping and
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 fact has side effects. The environment and the labour market are two principal scopes that certainly are affected. On the one hand, when people buy goods online, the environment faces some improvements. Purchase on the web reduces traffic and rush hour problems. Suppose you want to buy something, you must visit several shopping centres and stores to find desired goods and drive from one spot to another in the city, but if you do it online, you can reduce avoidable going around. When you just scroll up and down to find stuff, you minimize the usage of fossil fuels, help to keep air clean, and postpone climate changes.
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 of environmental consideration, virtual shopping is extremely suggested.
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, online stores influence on the labour market. Online goods may be cheaper because sellers are not compelled to pay rent and electricity costs so people tend to shop online. Actual stores and shops lose their customers and may bust gradually. Middle mans and distributors lost their jobs. Small shops fade out and that's not good. But we should consider that many other jobs emerge.
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, programmers, web developers, and computer engineers could find many job positions. In conclusion, internet-based purchases have a variety of benefits concerning the environment and air pollution, but it's harmful to some businesses, but its effects on the labour market are unavoidable.
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