The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
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compares
the estimation of Change the verb form
compare
students
about their services
of IT support offered and opening
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the opening
hours
of full-time
and part
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part-time
time
ferformed
by a university.
As can be seen from the charts that Correct your spelling
performed
almost
people were satisfied Correct your spelling
most
about
Change the preposition
with
services
but the proportion of students
satisfaction
with IT Replace the word
satisfied
supporting
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support
were
higher than that with opening Change the verb form
was
hours
.
Looking at the positive responses first, the proportion of the full-time
students
ranked first with services
of IT supporting very happy accounted for 54% but only 5% of the part –
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part–time
time
students
rated services
of IT supporting as excellent and it held the third
position. However
, both of
the Change preposition
apply
full
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full-time
time
and part
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part-time
time
students
were satisfied with Correct article usage
the intrusment
intrusment
of opening Correct your spelling
intrusion
instrument
hours
with the the
former registering 87% and the latter a massive 72%.The percentage of both types of Remove the redundancy
apply
students
quite happy was equivalent with services
of IT supporting
and that of Replace the word
support
full
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full-time
time
students
was 11% higher than the figure of part
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part-time
time
students
with services
of opening hours
.
With regard to negative the percentage of part
-time
students
were
dissatisfied with Correct pronoun usage
who were
services
of IT supporting
made up nearly half and it was first – placed, Wrong verb form
support
while
the figure ofAdd a hyphen
part-time
part
time
students
, who was unhappy only constituted 15%.Strikingly, the emistation
of both kind Correct your spelling
imitation
emission
students
wad discontent with mean of opening hours
accounted a very small part
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