the chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average prices in 1989. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The average house
prices
in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 dramatically changed compared with the average house prices
in 1989. The cities are New York, USA; Frankfurt, Germany; Madrid
, Spain; London
, UK; and Tokyo, Japan.
Firstly
, the chart shows that in 1990-1995 average
in New York, Tokyo, and Correct article usage
the average
London
has -8% and -5% change from 1989 prices
, but New York increase
Wrong verb form
increased
5
% in Change preposition
by 5
1996
-2002 average Correct article usage
the 1996
as well as
London
that
increase Correct pronoun usage
which
12
%. Change preposition
by 12
On the other hand
, Tokyo is the only city that
is
still on negative percentage in 1996-2002.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Secondly
, Madrid
and Frankfurt show a positive percentage in 1990 and increases a
tiny proportion in 2002. Change preposition
by a
Madrid
with 1% in 1990 increases into
4% in 2002. Change preposition
to
On the other hand
, Frankfurt decrease a
tiny proportion in 2002.
In conclusion, Change preposition
by a
London
has the most huge development, in average house prices
between 1990 and 2002. Second
is Madrid
with -5% and 5% difference. The other cities adjust a tiny change for both different years from 1989 prices
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