We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will the used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more auspicious of their benefits?

In recent decades, the technology of electronics has rapidly been improved. So the majority of people have them and we tend to rely on them more and more extremely passing the time. Obviously there are the benefits and drawbacks of them. But to my mind, I think that the drawbacks overweight the benefits.

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essay, I will suggest the problems to be caused by dependence.

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of all, the computer provides convenience to us. Actually, we can get important information and buy st

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ithout going to the store due to it. It means that we can enhanced by information and save the time. In the future, there will be much better things to support comfort.

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However, this

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convenience brings many problems to our society.

Firstly

, the electronics make in connection among people. We can talk with friends and family in

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he screen whenever we want. So people do not have necessity to meet face to face.

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, it causes discontinuity to

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ach other anymore.

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, there is the la

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the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable

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f jobs. Along the advance of electronic devices, works by

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uman are replaced to them. So many people have a difficulty to get a job and the rate of un

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not engaged in a gainful occupation

unemployed

as been increased. Actually, according to a recent study, it shows that su

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of a quantity that can fulfill a need or requirement but without being abundant

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a computer

Consequently

, it brings the financial issue to our society. To sum up, the electronic things make us co

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comfortable, but

f we strongly depend on them, we will face to

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erious issues

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as discontinuity and disappear of jobs.