The news media have too much influence on people’s lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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Just a few decades ago, the news media was operated only through radio and printed newspapers.

However

, it has now entered the daily lives of citizens through many modern devices

such

as phones, laptops. While it has an enormous impact on most people’s life, I partly agree that

this

is a mostly negative development, and I will mention the reason why in

this

essay. On the one hand, Disadvantages of media include the risk of inaccurate reporting and loss of privacy. Sometimes, in a rush to be the

first

to break a story, the media give inaccurate or inaccurate

information

This

can be confusing, and depending on the

information

, it can damage the reputation of one or more

people

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person

For instance

few weeks

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a few weeks

ago, Viet Nam as well as the whole world

have

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has

to fight against the corona virus, and lots of Vietnamese people post some wrong

information

on social media

such

as Facebook, Instagram,

…

Accept space

…

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

. Due to that wrong news

people

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person

in my countries become

confuse

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confused

and worry about their health because of the danger of the virus.

On the other hand

, the media can play a very vital and helpful role. News can leave audiences with different impressions about life around the world. Via a few news articles, audiences can learn about how beautiful of other countries around the world. It is

also

common to find articles on how miserable people are at wars, how bad the living conditions are, or how unstable the political situation is in some certain areas.

In addition

, we make a lot of mutual acquaintances to broaden our knowledge about the culture,

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

or traditions of different nations. In conclusion, Personally I think that beside some drawback news media bring to us lots of

benefit

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benefits

, the role of news media as an

information

provider should be acknowledged. In case of emergency, it acts as a

lifesaver

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life saver

. So it is dependent on how people use it to provide or approach

information

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