In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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Parenting a teenager is never easy, In some places of the US after a specific time at night teenagers are only allowed to be outdoors accompanied by an adult. I believe teenage is the most vulnerable age in which children go through many physical and emotional changes and they are required to be monitored. As children become
teens they
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teens, they
experience hormone changes like puberty and start to believe they are matured or old enough to
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dress
their own issues and dislike any involvement from adults We must surely must respect their privacy and give them required space
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helps to build a strong parent- child relationship and the more friendly we are towards are our children the better we will be able to understand them
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becomes easier to strike conversations with them.
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example some
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children might go through
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an identity crisis
identity crises
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self esteem
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issues, etc.
issues etc.
During these times it is imperative not to show
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and be patient with their thoughts and decisions.
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should not provide excess freedom as they will end up taking advantage of that situation
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All teens mostly prefer spending more time with their friends and enjoy being outdoors with them. If you fail to keep a tab of their relationships or routines they might become victims of substance abuse and cause troubles.
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due to peer pressure many teenagers are seen taking drugs or drinking alcohol while attending late night parties. It will always
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to keep track of your children so that you can stop from committing any crimes or getting involved in any bad habits. Considering the above points
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would like to conclude saying that it is always safe to keep your children at home and not let them wander outside after specific hours at night.
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