Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

With the advent of technology like everyone else nowadays even children rely on computers for various purposes. Though computers help to make our life convenient, it

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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

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own drawbacks and

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refers to the speaker or writer

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agree that using

computer

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computers

a computer

the computer

on a daily basis can have negative effects on children.

Firstly

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,

Unllike

marked by dissimilarity

unlike

olden days

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the olden days

children are now introduced to computers at a very young

age which

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age, which

enhances them to master

this

new technology at an early stage of life. Children find it easier to use computers for study purposes than refer to books.

For example

: Finding a topic is much easier and faster using a

computer

than a book. Students preparing for school projects

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find

it convenient to use computers as they enable us to find relevant information from different articles whereas for the same topic you might be required to refer to many books in order to find the substantial material.

However focussing

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However, focussing

on the screen of a

computer

for too long

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without question and beyond doubt

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causes trouble for your eyes in the long run.

For instance

Children who are addicted to games are seen using computers for

prelonged

relatively long in duration; tediously protracted

prolonged

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hours, which

causes headaches and even problems with their

eye sight

normal use of the faculty of vision

eyesight

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They

become less attentive to the outside world due to binge watching programs on

computers which

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computers, which

results in children being lethargic and can

also

have health issues as it is important for them to actively participate and play games as it helps to boost their brain functioning. In

conclusion despite

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conclusion, despite

the advantages, drawbacks of using a

computer

on a regular basis cannot be overlooked.

Although

computers help to make your life easier children should

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in addition

also

be taught not to over use them due to the various consequences it can have on them

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