Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Crime

commitment protection is the responsibility of

government

based on some people's

belief but

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belief, but

on the other

hand some

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hand, some

consider that it is a personal responsibility. In my opinion, I think that both sides are partially true and it needs to discuss both of them concurrently,

besides

, I think

first

of all people have to protect themselves from committing the

crime

and

then

if they are not successful

,

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,

it would be governments' turn to control the criminals. On the one hand, people are responsible for their actions, that means, each person is taught about right and wrong

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

,

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,

so, they are expected to act in

right way

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the right way

a right way

, in another word, they are expected to have

self-control

of doing unpleasant or harmful actions especially when their act or

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

might hurt other people. Totally, a

conscience

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conscientious

person never commits the

crime

and

as a result

of that, the

crime

rate would reduce, if people improve their

self-control

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

or listen to their conscience.

On the other hand

, some people believe that

government

has to prevent the

crime

commitment

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commission

committed

. It is partially true because a powerful

government

could run out the law or increase the security in the community by training more police officers. Sometimes

government

neglected some of the rules because of criminal connections with authorities and the lack of strength in running out of the law increase the

crime

rates. What's more lack of security, make it possible to committing the

crime

without fear of arresting or punishment.

Finally

, in my point of view, it is essential to teach the younger generation how to have

self-control

in order to create individual protection of committing a

crime

and the

government

should increase their monitoring on punishments and security. In conclusion, we have two groups of people. One

consider

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considers

that the cause of

reduction

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reduced

the

crime

rate could depend on authority controls and another group think that

self-control

is one of the best ways of preventing a

crime

commitment

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committed

.