In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

Although
on the one hand technological developments have happened in agriculture, as in all other sectors,
on the other hand
, many people all around the world, especially in Africa, continue to die due to hunger. In
this
essay, I am going to mention reasons of
this
situation and to prevent
this
humanity tragedy what kind of things can be done by people and governments. Countries where
such
problems occur are called backward countries. In those countries
this
issue occurs because of two main reasons.
First cause
Suggestion
The first cause
is based on environmental factors. Climate and soil should be suitable for farming
otherwise
it is almost impossible. Since making the land suitable for agriculture is very expensive and not affordable
also
to make it you should have advance technology
such
as Israel.
However
, in general, the
problem
does not depend on environmental factors. In spite of some countries have appropriate climate and soil for farming, they cannot produce anything.
This
situation is seen more commonly. These countries either do not have the technology required or do not have financial power and sometimes both of them. To overcome
this
tragedy, I recommend a two step solution. In
first stage
Suggestion
a first stage
the first stage
leading countries of the world should help both economic and technological. They can create a help pool for these underdeveloped countries. After the sufficient help and development
first
step end.
Then
, the most important step is started. At
this
stage the most significant countries should lead again, but
this
time to utterly solve the
problem
. The leading countries should help them to have sustainable agriculture and economic policies without interfering with their freedom and rights. To sum it up, people all around the world have always ignored
this
situation, but
problem
Suggestion
the problem
is worsening day by day. The solution to the
problem
is not to give them fish, but to teach them how to fish. If we can do it, the Earth will be more appropriate for life.
Moreover
, when people’s life quality increase, migration to the developed countries
also decrease
Suggestion
also decreases
quickly.
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