With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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In past

years it

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years, it

has seen an increase of

e-book

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and a decrease of

traditional book

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traditional books

the traditional book

. In some

people

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peoples

opinion it’s

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opinion, it’s

a way forward, albeit others can contradict with them. People will prevent a deforestation or other ecological problems with usage of e-

books but

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books, but

they are

also

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some drawbacks.

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, one advantage of using

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e-book

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is that it’s better for our ecology. People will help our planet

to stay

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stay

in better condition, what’s very important.

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e-book

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are much more comfortable that the paper one.

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, people don’t need to have many

books whereas

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books, whereas

they have

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e-book

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that can include all of them.

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, electronic books are very compact

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People don’t have to carry a heavy paper book because they had a compact and

slight

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a slight e-book

e-book

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, one problem is that all electronics have a detrimental effect on our health.

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, gadgets emit a radiation and damage our eyes. Another possible issue is that electronic

devises

an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'

devices

are so fragile. People must treat to them so carefully and don’t damage, because it will be a problem to fix

device

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the device

. The

last

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possible drawback is that device can simply run out a battery. It will be so unpleasant to read something

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about

it while

e-book

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just turn

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just turns

off.

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, it may be concluded that while people will

safe

save from ruin, destruction, or harm

save

our planet from some ecological issues, they will be exposed by radiation and blurred their vision because of electronic devises.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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244 words

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Portability
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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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