Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home, and more children will study from home, as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this will be a positive or negative deuelopment?

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We are living in the age of modern

teachnology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

now, which makes human life easier, much more interesting and even full of

challanges

take exception to

challenges

. Thanks to

tecnological

based in scientific and industrial progress

technological

advances we can achieve much progress in distant learning using home computer as well. In my personal opinion,

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issue has both

postive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

and negative consequences.

Firstly

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, computer-aided learning can be more harmful than

benificial

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

. Young

people including

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people, including

children spend too much surfing the internet or communicating in social networks.

As a

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result they

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result, they

have

lack

Suggestion

a lack

of concentration and even disability which can cause major problems for the future of

young generation

Suggestion

the young generation

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, it may increase the risk of internet threats, the use of improper social sites, advertisements for

unhealty

not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind

unhealthy

ways of life. These negative aspects can influence badly on

unexperienced

having experience; having knowledge or skill from observation or participation

experienced

inexperienced

individuals like children and teenagers.

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, the

aspest

a distinct feature or element in a problem

aspect

of some other

heath

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

health

issues like poor eyesight resulted in using computers and other gadgets more than allowed time should be taken into consideration.

On the other hand

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, the opportunity of working in

distance

Suggestion

the distance

benificial

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

number

Suggestion

a number

importsnt

of great significance or value

important

cases. Currently the whole world is suffering from Covid 19 pandemic. Schools, universities and all other places of education are closed. Using computer based methods may be very fruitful in

this

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case.

Moreover

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, people with some disabilities are very happy to get

this

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opportunity.

This

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helps them not to be isolated from the society and have the same rights to study and increase personal development. In conclusion, as mentioned above, the given issue has

it is

it's

pros and cons. The thing that charges for using internet services are becoming cheaper and they may help us develop new online projects, improve learning standards and share them with users from all parts of the world. We must never misuse the opportunities though.

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Topic Vocabulary:

work-life balance
increased productivity
reduced commuting time
flexibility
convenience
lack of social interaction
potential distractions
limited access to resources
facilities
increased isolation
mental health issues

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