Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

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With the advent of technology like everyone else nowadays even children rely on computers for various purposes. Though computers help to make our life easier, faster and super fun.It
aslo
in addition
also
has a few drawbacks and
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I
agree that using these devices on a daily basis can have negative effects on children.
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Unlike in the past children are now introduced to computers at a very young age enhances them to master
this
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new technology at an early stage of life. They find it convenient to use computers for education and entertainment. Information is
aways
at all times; all the time and on every occasion
always
on our finger tips.
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: Finding a topic is much effortless and faster using a computer than a book.
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Also just
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Also, just
with an internet connection anything can be viewed on computers that keeps you entertained like various streaming services like
netflix
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Netflix
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amazon prime enables us to watch anything according to our likes.
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,
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however focussing
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however, focussing
on the screen of a computer for too long definitely causes trouble for your eyes in
future
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the future
.
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: Children who are addicted to games are seen using computers for prolonged
hours causing
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hours, causing
headaches and even problems with their eyesight. They become less attentive to the outside world due to binge watching programs on
device resulting
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device, resulting
in children being lethargic and can
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have health issues it is important for them to actively participate and play games as it helps to boost their brain functioning. To summarize, even though there are many advantages of using technology, the negative effect it has on children cannot certainly be overlooked.
Although
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it
help
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helps
has helped
to make your life
easier but
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easier, but
it is imperative to make children
undertand
know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
the negative effects it can have on them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Screen time
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Cognitive development
  • Internet addiction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Inappropriate content
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual learning environments
  • Parental controls
  • Moderation
  • Online safety
  • Tech-savvy
  • E-learning
  • Information technology
  • Eye strain
  • Social skills
  • Multitasking
  • Interactive education
  • Health repercussions
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