Topic: Some sociologists say that, it is a waste of time for students to pursue secondary education for 12 years. It is better to shorten it to 9 years only, then go to vocational school to learn a skill applied in their jobs or go to university to get a degree. To what extent do you agree with this?

It is believed that students should only set aside nine-year secondary

education

,

then

do the vocational training or attend universities in order to save time. From my perspective, while I am in agreement with the statement above, I remain supportive of the idea that learners are encouraged to pursue the twelve-year for satisfactory completion. To commence with, students complete their secondary

education

within nine years extend opportunities to develop their potential skills. People who have talent in creative fields

such

as arts, acting or dancing need to gain hands-on experience rather than theoretical knowledge; as they must apply what they learn into realistic situations. In those cases, three extra years of higher

education

is

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are

no longer necessary;

instead

, pursuing an acting course or involving in some music

gameshows

seems to be more practical and useful.

Besides

, we have truly admired many billionaires who dared to drop out of high school to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

their dream and currently they own a great amount of fortune.

Therefore

, it is no stretch to say that following a nine-year curriculum is the key to happiness and a promising career.

On the other hand

, universal high school

education

is strongly promoted in many countries in the world owing to its importance. Educators compile twelve-year training from primary to professional levels in order to afford children with the most stable backgrounds before reaching adulthood.

This

results from the fact that they can acquire profound insights into both science and society during the class period.

Also

, a High School Diploma is deemed equitable evidence of hard work so recruiters are likely to select those with one among a pool of job applicants.

Conversely

/Meanwhile, drop-out students have few chances to gain high salary jobs because innovative curriculum force them to complete high school before attending universities Apparently, not only does a twelve-year

education

benefit individuals but it

also

brings growth and

evolvement

the act of sharing in the activities of a group

involvement

to

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of

human beings. In conclusion, each form of

education

perfects people in its own way so the merits are on over-reliance on individual passion and purposes. We must identify our final destination to make

the clearest

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the clear

choice.