Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more people are eating it. Why are more people eating eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

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All the medical officers say that eating junk food has adverse effect on the body, yet the utilization is increasing by individuals. What is the reason behind having those meals. And,

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also how

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also, how

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be resolved.

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we talk about the lifestyle changes, it has a direct impact on the type of meal being consumed.

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: People are living on their own and have no one to cook at

home

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so easy option is to order something from outside or have a food outside.

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more convenient than cooking at

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, because it saves time and effort and

also

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the online activities which makes food ordering very easy which aids in eating more of outside and junk

meal

the bags of letters and packages that are transported by the postal service

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, if we just take small steps like do some research and be aware about the side effects of these foods,

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it will help us in reducing the consumption of these foods. Appointing some person at

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home which

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home, which

will help in cooking will be a huge impact.

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: Earlier, when I went to Delhi away from

home

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, my consumption was usually of outside meals, but later on once I hired a maid for cooking, it reduced my habit of eating out and

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I started having meals at

home

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most of the times. So to conclude, I would like to restate that the fast and busy lifestyle have impacted the way people have

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a drink

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it increased utilization of un-healthy meal. And to solve

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issue we must be aware about the

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nutrients that

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increase our chances of eating at

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either by appointing a maid, or living with a group of people which will help in dividing the duties of cooking a meal.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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296 words

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Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more people are eating it. Why are more people eating eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

Fully explain your ideas

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