Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more people are eating it. Why are more people eating eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

All the medical officers say that eating junk food has adverse effect on the body, yet the utilization is increasing by individuals. What is the reason behind having those meals. And,
also how
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also, how
can
this
be resolved.
Firstly if
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Firstly, if
we talk about the lifestyle changes, it has a direct impact on the type of meal being consumed.
For example
: People are living on their own and have no one to cook at
home
so easy option is to order something from outside or have a food outside.
Also it's
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Also, it's
more convenient than cooking at
home
, because it saves time and effort and
also
the online activities which makes food ordering very easy which aids in eating more of outside and junk
meal
the bags of letters and packages that are transported by the postal service
mail
.
On the other hand
, if we just take small steps like do some research and be aware about the side effects of these foods,
then
it will help us in reducing the consumption of these foods. Appointing some person at
home which
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home, which
will help in cooking will be a huge impact.
For instance
: Earlier, when I went to Delhi away from
home
, my consumption was usually of outside meals, but later on once I hired a maid for cooking, it reduced my habit of eating out and
consequently
I started having meals at
home
most of the times. So to conclude, I would like to restate that the fast and busy lifestyle have impacted the way people have
drink
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a drink
,
hence
it increased utilization of un-healthy meal. And to solve
this
issue we must be aware about the
nutrients of that
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nutrients that
we intake and
also
increase our chances of eating at
home
either by appointing a maid, or living with a group of people which will help in dividing the duties of cooking a meal.
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