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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce this amount of rubbish produced

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The modern society is generating an increasing amount of
waste
 and the
waste
 products,
waste
management
 has become one of the pressing issues both in developing and developed countries.
This
 trend is mainly due to the consumer culture and packaging.
However
, there is a range of measures governments could be implemented to resolve the issue of the rubbish. There are various reasons associated with the rubbish. One of the main reasons is consumer culture. The amount of
waste
 people produce has been increased. Some people not aware of the effects of the littering and they drop litter anywhere rather than disposing it. In recent time, Packaging is very important part of selling the products and most of the sellers and use plastics to pack the materials,
also
 most food companies selling products in plastic packaging, which are non-biodegradable materials,
besides
this
people
Suggestion
person
 feel less inclined to dispose these wastes and it starts to pile up.
Hence
, when people don’t care much about recycling and proper
waste
management
, it creates more garbage. There are various reasons associated with the rubbish. One of the main reasons is consumer culture. The amount of
waste
 people produce has been increased. Some people not aware of the effects of the littering and they drop litter anywhere rather than disposing it.
Hence
, when people don’t care much about recycling and proper
waste
management
, it creates more garbage. In conclusion, the lack of awareness and uses of more plastics will lead to create more and more garbage. Only when governments are able to ensure that there are enough bins in the society and education to children about
waste
management
, will
this
 situation be resolve
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