Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car free day every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

Few citizens believe that there should be no car on the
road
once in every month. There are merits and demerits of
this
thought. In
first paragraph
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the first paragraph
, I will shed some light on the advantages and
then
discuss disadvantages. One of the most important
benefit
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benefits
is there will be less pollution in the air, smoke which comes out from the vehicles is polluting our atmosphere. As there is a tremendous increase in the population of the world, in every home we will find one or two personal cars. No personal vehicles on the
road
mean less smoke in the air.
Secondly
, it will reduce the noise pollution. There will be no noise of engines and horns on the
road
which will give a pleasant feeling. Because of the vehicles people forget the importance of
walk
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the walk
, which is important for our health. In Europe and UK
mostly
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most
people are using bicycles for travel.
Additionally
, if there is less traffic, cleaning and maintenance of the roads can
also
be done which is not possible in normal working days because of traffic load.
Firstly
, our public transport is not capable to handle the entire load and will be crowded heavily on that day. People will not reach in their offices on time,
also
majority will decide to not to go
on
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to
work. So it will become an off day, there is a loss of work. The people from
middle class
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the middle class
who have no cars and who are always using the public buses
also
there are many who have health issues and they do not like public transport as well as for ladies and children there is a difficulty
also
for
travelheir
a person who changes location
travellers
travel
also
. In conclusion, if there are no cars on the
road
, it will help in reducing the
pollution but
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pollution, but
the common public will face a lot of problems.
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