Topic: People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent decades,

people

have achieved unprecedented success in

communication

and

transportation

with the help of

the

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technological evolution.

People

can easily live or work in another country.

Although

The convenience of air travel and modern

communication

is applauded

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a lot of experts, there still exist many limitations. On the one hand, there are some benefits to the development of

communication

technology

and

transportation

.

Technology

has changed

a

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way

people

live and work.

For example

,

people

may want to post their latest news on Facebook, enabling

to

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their

friend

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friends

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and family

not

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only keep abreast of what has been happening but

also

send comments, which is useful to

people

who live far away from home. Another

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advantage is that they can easily not only commute from home to

office

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But

also

travel abroad in a minimum time. To illustrate,

people

broaden their horizons and learn a lot of new things from other countries Which are essential to developing countries.

On the other hand

,

communication

technology

and

transportation

are

Not

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without downsides.

First,

communication

technology

makes

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difficulty

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to focus, pay attention, and connect with others.

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, it is frequent,

people

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keeping an eye on their phone screen

while

they are Talking, which decreases interaction. So, family members have the potential to sabotage any family relationship.

Second,

the security of transferring by air travel. The fact, a large number of fights

is

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fell

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fallen

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down

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or disappeared without

reasons

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reason

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, which makes

people

not only

are

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scared

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but

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also

consider going abroad.

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, the MH370 plane

was

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disappeared in 2004, which affected the economy and

people

's beliefs. In conclusion, given the clear advantages of

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development

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communication

technology

and

transportation

have

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, there

are

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is

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still

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a

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limitation

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limitations

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.

People

acwledging

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acknowledging

these limitations, the government and the

people

should find a way to deal with them