Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern world, some people believe that moving companies, factories, and their employees from big cities to small towns might improve some of the worst traffic and housing problems. I wholeheartedly agree with
this
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solution. On the one hand, nowadays there are many people
live
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living
in the
city
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more than ever before.
Therefore
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, moving factories and major corporations in the
countryside
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will reduce traffic problems. It makes apparent advantage of the decreased population used
to
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in
the vehicle. As evidence, in Ha Noi,
it
it is
it's
not uncommon when the streets are overcrowded. Almost people travel to work by private vehicles,
this
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leads to overcrowded roads during the rush
house
a period of time assigned for work
hours
. If their workplaces are based in rural areas,
this
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will not be able to
case
the act of pursuing in an effort to overtake or capture
chase
.
In addition
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, it is making opportunities to
works
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work
for people live in towns.
For example
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, many companies are moving to the
countryside
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that will attract people to remove it. It will make the urban population shrink significantly.
On the other hand
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, when lots of people living in the
city
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that formed on many slums. They are living in slums or informal settlements with water and sanitation problems.
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extremely dirty to make environmental issues. For
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reason, when they moved to the town that helps the
city
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is not polluted with the slum.
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, living in the
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city especially
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city, especially
inner-
city
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areas with a faster pace of life that claimed
to
being one more than one
two
people must pay huge money to buy
ann
indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise
an
on
apartments
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apartment
building as high heaven. It is extremely
damage
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damaging
.
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This
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Thus
, moving jobs and people to the
countryside
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, developing countries will have more time to improve their infrastructure to deal with surging urban populations. In conclusion, moving people to the
countryside
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will help to reduce traffic and housing problems, especially in developing countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • housing problems
  • countryside
  • large companies
  • factories
  • employees
  • urban areas
  • land availability
  • relocate
  • stimulate economic development
  • challenges
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • rural areas
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