benedicta: Question : Some people believe that Is best to accept a bad situation such as, unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In Human
life
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there are many problems came which are unexpected.But, Chasing that
problem
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or running from it depends on peoples choice.I
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experience many difficult situations in my
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.
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confidently
fight
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with that
problem
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.The given essay
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built on that
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.
i
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I
will discuss both views in my essay and give my opinion in the end.
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, today's fast
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life human
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life, human
minds are not in stable condition to handle any major
problem
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with politely. So, normally
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of
fight
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with that
situation
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they try to run away from it.
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as, many people aren't satisfied with their job because of too much workload, not enough salary, deadlines
.
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.
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, without
fight
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back with that
problem
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they simply accept it and do their job.
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, Money plays an important role in
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modern
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.People want a comfortable and easy
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.And, Try to make them update with the latest fashion and technology.But, because of low income they cannot fulfil their dreams and Owing to
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they just make their minds.
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, a survey taken by Indian government in 2019 7 out of 10 people satisfy with what they have.
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, Many people who willing to give better
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to their family try to improve their
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and
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, work hard to achieve it.
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, I would like to share an example of my role model whom I admire most. The name of the person is Mr.
Mukeshbhai
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Ambani.He is India's number 1 richest person and number 3 in Asia.He has started with
middle class
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the middle class
. But, his goal to give their family a better
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and hard work gives him success.
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, right now nothing is in
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world which he cannot afford. In conclusion. I reiterate that nothing is impossible in
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world. If he/she makes their mind to achieve their target. It doesn't matter how bad
situation
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is but, hard work and confidence can achieve anything they want. So,
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of accepting bad
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situation try
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situation, try
to
fight
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back with that
problem
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.
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