Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extend do you agree?

In today’s

world there

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world, there

is an increasing debate discussing whether people in jail should be made to do

community

work

or not. Under a personal

perspective I

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perspective, I

am partially agree

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partially agree

. The arguments to support

this

opinion are that a

person

who committed a minor crime should do

community

work

in order to process a

rehabilitation

.

However

, major offenders should receive indoor

rehabilitation

and must be treated before any outdoor exposure. Below, the following essay will demonstrate my position on

this

matter for minor offenders and major criminals.

Firstly

, a

person

who committed minor crimes should do

community

work

. Numerous individuals around the world commit crime due to sensible reasons. Sometimes, minor offenders do not have any previous criminal record.

As a result

, law institutions should treat them differently

to

being one more than one

two

major offenders considering that the objective should be to maintain peace in the

society

, and

not to punish

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don't punish

people.

Community

work

such

as cleaning streets, planting trees, and working for charity is an effective method to reinforce values in a minor

offender

. The lack of

this

useful technique means the minor

offender

would be associate it with hard-core criminals. The outcomes of a negative relationship in jail would reintegrate a damage

person

in the

society

. A recent study made by the University of British Columbia in January 2010 and recently broadcasted by BBC news found that well above 70% of minor offenders who did not do unpaid

community

activities were more likely to display negative opinions about criminal justice, which is a crucial highlight for potential

reoffenders

a person who transgresses moral or civil law

offenders

.

Secondly

, A major

offender

should receive

rehabilitation

inside

jail’s ground

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the jail’s ground

and must be treated. Since the purpose of criminal justice is to maintain peace among the individuals, it should be strongly considered the type of criminal before thinking about

rehabilitation

for

society

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societal

reintegration. Following

this

further

, major crimes

such

as murder, kidnapping, terrorism, human trafficking, child abuse or false imprisonment should be carefully put aside in

jail’s ground

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the jail’s ground

. Humans who committed those crimes tend to have strong arguments about what is good or wrong. An instance where a minor

offender

who has problems with his wife is doing

community

work

next

to a serial killer, could have extreme negative outcomes. To illustrate

this

point, a world-famous serial killer like Ted Bundy could involve a

person

lost in his eloquence, charisma, and smart character. To conclude with a human perspective. Unfortunately, we are all different. Unpaid

community

work

should have the limited participation of minor offenders. A

person

who was found guilty of pick pocketing

next

to a drug trafficker is more likely to commit a major

offense

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offence

.

However

, individuals with minor crimes and the appropriate

rehabilitation

could stay away from unlawful activities and become in a new valuable piece

for

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of

the

society

.