Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extend do you agree?

In today’s

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world, there

is an increasing debate discussing whether people in jail should be made to do

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or not. Under a personal

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perspective, I

am partially agree

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partially agree

. The arguments to support

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opinion are that a

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who committed a minor crime should do

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in order to process a

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.

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, major offenders should receive indoor

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and must be treated before any outdoor exposure. Below, the following essay will demonstrate my position on

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matter for minor offenders and major criminals.

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, a

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who committed minor crimes should do

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. Numerous individuals around the world commit crime due to sensible reasons. Sometimes, minor offenders do not have any previous criminal record.

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, law institutions should treat them differently

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being one more than one

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major offenders considering that the objective should be to maintain peace in the

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, and

not to punish

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don't punish

people.

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as cleaning streets, planting trees, and working for charity is an effective method to reinforce values in a minor

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. The lack of

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useful technique means the minor

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would be associate it with hard-core criminals. The outcomes of a negative relationship in jail would reintegrate a damage

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in the

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. A recent study made by the University of British Columbia in January 2010 and recently broadcasted by BBC news found that well above 70% of minor offenders who did not do unpaid

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activities were more likely to display negative opinions about criminal justice, which is a crucial highlight for potential

reoffenders

a person who transgresses moral or civil law

offenders

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, A major

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should receive

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inside

jail’s ground

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the jail’s ground

and must be treated. Since the purpose of criminal justice is to maintain peace among the individuals, it should be strongly considered the type of criminal before thinking about

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society

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societal

reintegration. Following

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further

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, major crimes

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as murder, kidnapping, terrorism, human trafficking, child abuse or false imprisonment should be carefully put aside in

jail’s ground

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the jail’s ground

. Humans who committed those crimes tend to have strong arguments about what is good or wrong. An instance where a minor

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who has problems with his wife is doing

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next

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to a serial killer, could have extreme negative outcomes. To illustrate

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point, a world-famous serial killer like Ted Bundy could involve a

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lost in his eloquence, charisma, and smart character. To conclude with a human perspective. Unfortunately, we are all different. Unpaid

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should have the limited participation of minor offenders. A

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who was found guilty of pick pocketing

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to a drug trafficker is more likely to commit a major

offense

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

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, individuals with minor crimes and the appropriate

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could stay away from unlawful activities and become in a new valuable piece

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of

the

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